lead - I thought the lead was good. The writer included the most important piece of the story, which was LB volleyball winning both matches last weekend.
nut-graf - I thought the nut-graf was ok but I think that the final score of Fridays match, ending 3-1 should have been before the actual scores of each game in the match.
3 things that could improve - The first thing I think could be improved is getting some quotes or insight from the players. The second thing to improve could be giving more information about the situation the team is in regarding the NWAACC Championships. Third I think the story could have used a little more about individual players who are performing well.
quote - "Saturday's game against Umpqua looked to be fairly easy for the roadrunners as they handled their opponents 25-16."
My take - I think the story was ok, but not that great. I think there should have been more information, definately more information about the Situation the team is in regarding the NWAACC Championships. Such as, who they could play and when.
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